treatment pitch and feedback

In this video my group and I gave what we had so far to the group and told them what type of ideas. however we did not really plan our pitch properly and could not convey our ideas easily, which kind of lead to some confusion about whether it is conceptional or narrative. all in all, from the pitch we gathered that the group liked the track which is a good thing. In order to improve our treatment and pitch my group and I will be making a new treatment with improvements and more detail to our scenes in correlation with the track. Overall we took on board the comments given by the group and my group and i discussed how we would develop our ideas in the new treatment.